Hi,
just some thoughts while I'm listening to your mix:
I do not really like the kick's sound. Now that is to big parts the problem of the raw kicktrack, which does not sound especially pretty to begin with. But I wonder if a different tonal shaping would help in this regard during the intro/verses. It seems to work during the chorus, though.
The snare sounds a bit too flat/papery. Again, that is a source problem, but perhaps you can work on it?
The guitars sound rather hollow and indirect to me, I miss a bit of warmth and energy. I know that it is there, but it is hidden in the phase issue that this guitar tracks happen to be delivered with.
The balance sounds rather good, though. I like the vocals.
Cheers
Artbass
just some thoughts while I'm listening to your mix:
I do not really like the kick's sound. Now that is to big parts the problem of the raw kicktrack, which does not sound especially pretty to begin with. But I wonder if a different tonal shaping would help in this regard during the intro/verses. It seems to work during the chorus, though.
The snare sounds a bit too flat/papery. Again, that is a source problem, but perhaps you can work on it?
The guitars sound rather hollow and indirect to me, I miss a bit of warmth and energy. I know that it is there, but it is hidden in the phase issue that this guitar tracks happen to be delivered with.
The balance sounds rather good, though. I like the vocals.
Cheers
Artbass