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Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants'
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(22-05-2019, 03:03 AM)javierpg84 Wrote:
(21-05-2019, 08:19 PM)Deliza Wrote: Hi Javi, that intro is really beautiful, flawless minus one small detail (that I might be imagining, this is beast mode nitpicking): is the acoustic guitar ducked to the vocals? Maybe it's just level automation but it seems as if the guitar goes up and down after the vocal lines and it's sliiiiightly noticeable.

I didn't like that much the second half, once the drums come in. Individual sounds are good but the kick is just too loud, it stays over the beat making things feel unglued. On the other hand, snare sound might need some more space, some big stadium feel to match the epic of the tune. Manic Streets Preacher's "A Design For Life" could be a perfect blueprint for this tune's drums, methinks and it has a kinda similar "only drums ending".

Hi Deliza:

Thank you for listening and providing feedback. I agree after a few hours of brake. The kick is a bit loud. Yes the level changes in the guitar are automation moves I did. This mix was done in 1 hour and 30 mins. I have to go back and work on your comments. Thank you again.



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Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by javierpg84 - 21-05-2019, 04:43 AM
RE: Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by Deliza - 21-05-2019, 08:19 PM
RE: Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by javierpg84 - 22-05-2019, 03:03 AM
RE: Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by javierpg84 - 22-05-2019, 03:11 AM
RE: Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by Deliza - 22-05-2019, 03:01 PM
RE: Fergessen: 'Nos Palpitants' - by javierpg84 - 22-05-2019, 04:46 PM