10-04-2019, 04:51 PM
I could only give it a quick listen and don't have much in the way of notes or comments. My gut reaction is that it all works. I think the vocal could definitely come up. It feels "shy". The piano and organ could come back. It feels like a static mix. The balances work but there's room for more dynamics and automation moves. But as a base it's a good start.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.