Sounds good. The kick might be a little loud and I think the vocal could be more up front. The mandolins get lost. I've found that it's usually getting masked by some other instrument in a lot of mixes. It feels better from the solo on. There seems to be a bit of hiss or noise that becomes apparent at different times. Are you using any Waves plug-ins by any chance?
Minor points. Overall though it's pretty solid.
Minor points. Overall though it's pretty solid.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.