(25-01-2019, 05:06 PM)Olli H Wrote: Sounds pretty good and balanced to me.
Here’s some things to ponder for your second version:
As the kick has long tail and quite bright attack - and happens to hit in 2 and 4 - it sounds like a huge snare
Around 1:37 rhthm becomes a bit messy, maybe caused by long tails and cymbals
Around 1:50 there is bluesy conversational guitar. Discussion might work better if it had about same fullness as it’s counterpart, the vox.
Around 2:13 start a chorus. With some automation you might make the change a bit bigger. Now it remains in the same energy level as the verse before it. Also the vox feels a bit shy around there.
Hi Olli,
Thanks for taking the time to listen and give feedback. Some great points.....Will take on board as i work on version2.
cheers,
Simon
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