19-01-2019, 09:21 PM
Hi thedon
Just had a listen to v5. I really like some of your creative adds with the synth and dropout in v2. Also the claps with the whistle - nice !
My observations are a bit subjective, so let me just give you a few observations to consider.
- the vocal has a bit of a distorted vibe to it. Perhaps intentional? The rest of the track you have given a bit of a clean vibe, so I thought I would check with you
- the guitar 1 room reverb sounds great - the guitar 1 level felt hot to me, as I found myself listening to that vs. the lead vocal
- drum level felt a little low - could be intentional, but I was feeling that the relative level of them was a bit low and they could be used to help usher in the chorus' a bit more. If guitar 1 level comes down a bit, this may also help.
Thanks for posting - your creative choices gave your mix some unique elements which is cool !
Thomas
Just had a listen to v5. I really like some of your creative adds with the synth and dropout in v2. Also the claps with the whistle - nice !
My observations are a bit subjective, so let me just give you a few observations to consider.
- the vocal has a bit of a distorted vibe to it. Perhaps intentional? The rest of the track you have given a bit of a clean vibe, so I thought I would check with you
- the guitar 1 room reverb sounds great - the guitar 1 level felt hot to me, as I found myself listening to that vs. the lead vocal
- drum level felt a little low - could be intentional, but I was feeling that the relative level of them was a bit low and they could be used to help usher in the chorus' a bit more. If guitar 1 level comes down a bit, this may also help.
Thanks for posting - your creative choices gave your mix some unique elements which is cool !
Thomas