14-01-2019, 05:57 AM
Hey man,
The biggest thing I found is that your vocal sounds a bit pinched. I think there may be a bit too much low end, and maybe a bit much of a cut around 2-3k? It seems as if it is masking itself, if that makes any sense. It's warm, but I think it's missing articulation.
Maybe the piano is a little too stagnant in terms of volume throughout?
The cymbals maaaaaaaay be on the harsher side of bright, but that is something I definitely wrestled with this track, so take that with a grain of salt.
I really liked the space of everything, I just didn't "see" the vocals as compared to the other instruments. Maybe all you need is to bring it up a few dB?
Nice work!
Draper
The bass is pretty subby, but that works with the style.
The biggest thing I found is that your vocal sounds a bit pinched. I think there may be a bit too much low end, and maybe a bit much of a cut around 2-3k? It seems as if it is masking itself, if that makes any sense. It's warm, but I think it's missing articulation.
Maybe the piano is a little too stagnant in terms of volume throughout?
The cymbals maaaaaaaay be on the harsher side of bright, but that is something I definitely wrestled with this track, so take that with a grain of salt.
I really liked the space of everything, I just didn't "see" the vocals as compared to the other instruments. Maybe all you need is to bring it up a few dB?
Nice work!
Draper
The bass is pretty subby, but that works with the style.