I'm all right please critique

[Cranky Emu]

"I chose to add so much of it because my reference song had it but I may do another mix without it."

One thing I intentionally do is not listen to reference mixes or anyone else's mix of a song before I mix it. You can sometimes tend to try and emulate the reference mix. After you have done your mix and you're happy with your mix / your version then go ahead and listen to reference mixes, but don't go back and change your mix to suit the reference - develop your own style of mixing, don't emulate it.