27-12-2018, 10:31 AM
Hey vibhu,
I feel like you are almost there. The frequency balance and space are very nice. The arrangment changes in the end work well. I might try introducing the bass first and then bring the drums back in, just an idea.
Vocals also have good tone, just some 2k which is a bit much.
Claps in the end are nice, though missing a bit of smack for me. Hammond is a bit loud at times.
The biggest problem for me is dynamics. The master bus compressor or limiter seems to be working to much. You can clearly hear the music becoming louder after the vocal phrase after 1:26. (pumping) Relaxing the loudness treatment would help letting everything breathe.
Cheers,
Lukas
I feel like you are almost there. The frequency balance and space are very nice. The arrangment changes in the end work well. I might try introducing the bass first and then bring the drums back in, just an idea.
Vocals also have good tone, just some 2k which is a bit much.
Claps in the end are nice, though missing a bit of smack for me. Hammond is a bit loud at times.
The biggest problem for me is dynamics. The master bus compressor or limiter seems to be working to much. You can clearly hear the music becoming louder after the vocal phrase after 1:26. (pumping) Relaxing the loudness treatment would help letting everything breathe.
Cheers,
Lukas