Secretariat: 'Borderline' (critiques plz)

[Deliza]

Though I find I like your mix more and more as I play it, that fake room treatment might have been a little too much, Lukas. There's an uneasy contrast, space wise, between drums and and everything else. Guitars and voice sound really good in isolation while drums sound good too but feel too wet, distant and soft in comparison, so it's like they belong to a different mix. Guitars panned right might be too dry and inyourface (the electric one, especially), too, adding up to that feeling of not glueing together. I'd like to know what happens if you make that guitar a little darker and softer while giving more presence to the drums. Or just add some room reverb to the guitars and voice, who knows?

The sweetening jump out of the middle8 and the solo are great, love for details always pays. But that second voice is asking for a little love!