30-11-2017, 02:15 PM
6b is too mono and up the middle for me and would benefit from some soundstaging and placement. The sax, flute, keyboard are all central in the image you are presenting. You;ve done a good job to explore creativity with the sax though I'd be mindful of the things going on around it. There's a shaker panning all over the place for example. Changing one thing affects all others. It's a mantra I've discovered the painful way.
Percussion mixes in with the drums and makes an overly busy and confusing delivery. I think that's a tricky one to deal with. I'm therefore not sure what you want my ear to focus on because it's all after my attention.
The flute loses some notes around 1'00. I chose to fix the sour note as well as the keyboard, which dropped out of the groove at one point.
It's a mix I can tell you had some fun with. Well done for trying some fresh ideas.
Percussion mixes in with the drums and makes an overly busy and confusing delivery. I think that's a tricky one to deal with. I'm therefore not sure what you want my ear to focus on because it's all after my attention.
The flute loses some notes around 1'00. I chose to fix the sour note as well as the keyboard, which dropped out of the groove at one point.
It's a mix I can tell you had some fun with. Well done for trying some fresh ideas.
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