Does it suit you guys ?

[Roy]

It sounds pretty good. I like the hi-hat accents but it mat be a little loud. It feels disconnected from the mix. Maybe a bit of reverb might make it feel a bit more connected to the band. Though then it might get washy. Other than that I can't hear anything that really feels off or that bothers me.

I don't think this track needs much 'creativity'. It's a pretty straight forward rock tune.

Good job.