01-06-2017, 03:31 AM
There's a few things here that jump out at me.
-It's pretty mono. I think spreading out the guitars would open things up.
-Tha bass is a bit loud but I suspect it might be trying to be heard over the guitars. If there was more space in the center for it it might be able to come back and sit better. The same goes for the piano in the bridge. The bass and kick might be conflicting but I can't be 100% sure on these earbuds.
-The bgvs in the chorus are a loud.
-I like the lead vocal reverb. Nothin fancy but it works.
-I like the snare sound. It's a little 'papery' but it's a cool sound.
I'd say take another look at it. It feels a little off and I think you can tweak it and get everything to work together better.
Hope that helps.
-It's pretty mono. I think spreading out the guitars would open things up.
-Tha bass is a bit loud but I suspect it might be trying to be heard over the guitars. If there was more space in the center for it it might be able to come back and sit better. The same goes for the piano in the bridge. The bass and kick might be conflicting but I can't be 100% sure on these earbuds.
-The bgvs in the chorus are a loud.
-I like the lead vocal reverb. Nothin fancy but it works.
-I like the snare sound. It's a little 'papery' but it's a cool sound.
I'd say take another look at it. It feels a little off and I think you can tweak it and get everything to work together better.
Hope that helps.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.