18-06-2013, 12:39 PM
It seems like you were going for a really clean mix with this one - everything seems bright, upfront, and the separation is nice. I would have probably included the great room sounds and bleed from the original tracks, but I would also go for a dirtier, more organic sound on this one. If you were going for that clean, polished sound, you pulled it off.
There's something funny about the bass tone when it first enters. It sounds like maybe you ran a LP filter on it and left only the low and mid-range frequencies, or boosted the mids. It almost doesn't sound like an acoustic upright bass anymore, but maybe that's what you were looking for. Also, the piano is a little bright for me. I think a more mellow, honky-tonk sound on the piano fits a little better with the song. Maybe I'm being too picky
Overall, nice job.
There's something funny about the bass tone when it first enters. It sounds like maybe you ran a LP filter on it and left only the low and mid-range frequencies, or boosted the mids. It almost doesn't sound like an acoustic upright bass anymore, but maybe that's what you were looking for. Also, the piano is a little bright for me. I think a more mellow, honky-tonk sound on the piano fits a little better with the song. Maybe I'm being too picky
Overall, nice job.