My Humble Hammer Try

[Philament]

At a first listen I find your mix sounds a bit dull ...

Hey Andy, thanks for the tips!
Now that you say those points, I totally see what you mean! What you write really shows me the importance of a good listening environment. Right now, I mix on some open back headphones, as my current situation doesn't allow a good room with acoustic treatment and good monitors. I guess I can hear the single parts already pretty good, but the context in a room probably changes the context drastically.

Although that's not perfect yet, I still got plenty out of this mix! Diving deeper into my plugins, seeing what was recorded and how... very valuable!

So big thanks!