31-03-2017, 10:25 AM
the mean time feel free to leave your comments and suggestions.
Cheers,
Doug
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I think its a great start dude.
Critiques to follow....
Your Bass guitar is there but not very defined except for the bridge. Maybe make separate tracks for bass guitar part. (1 DIST BGTR and 2 CLNBGTR)
There's a lack of a low end and it shows in your bass drops. If your crushing your listening environment then turn it down because the bass drop is weak. Also the bass drop is too short. Listen to A-list bands and their bass drops. A bass drop should envelope the sonic area somewhat. The bass drop occurs for at least a 1/4 note in the section this song.
In the vocal parts or the song 0:49 I would automate that reverb effect with HPF/LPF so the reverb doesn't stick out like a sore thumb. (and any other area that reverb is apparent)
The Drums sound great, shell wise. The overheads are a bit crispy and need to be tamed.
Overall, nothing in your mix is truly terrible or unfix able. This is a fantastic first effort with this mix. I would beat yourself up over tuning the vocals in this song, because it will require a lot of time and there are better things to do, like mix different songs.
Best.
Cheers,
Doug
[/quote]
I think its a great start dude.
Critiques to follow....
Your Bass guitar is there but not very defined except for the bridge. Maybe make separate tracks for bass guitar part. (1 DIST BGTR and 2 CLNBGTR)
There's a lack of a low end and it shows in your bass drops. If your crushing your listening environment then turn it down because the bass drop is weak. Also the bass drop is too short. Listen to A-list bands and their bass drops. A bass drop should envelope the sonic area somewhat. The bass drop occurs for at least a 1/4 note in the section this song.
In the vocal parts or the song 0:49 I would automate that reverb effect with HPF/LPF so the reverb doesn't stick out like a sore thumb. (and any other area that reverb is apparent)
The Drums sound great, shell wise. The overheads are a bit crispy and need to be tamed.
Overall, nothing in your mix is truly terrible or unfix able. This is a fantastic first effort with this mix. I would beat yourself up over tuning the vocals in this song, because it will require a lot of time and there are better things to do, like mix different songs.
Best.
My Original Music
"One often learns more from ten days of agony than ten years of contentment."
Pro Tools 12.6/Studio One 3 Pro
Studiolive 16 Series III
Yamaha HS5/HS8
Console 1
"One often learns more from ten days of agony than ten years of contentment."
Pro Tools 12.6/Studio One 3 Pro
Studiolive 16 Series III
Yamaha HS5/HS8
Console 1