14-12-2016, 11:16 AM
Hello Greg,
Listening with headphones, tonally I like what I hear. There is just a balance issue that I think you could work on a little more. The second guitar part sounds somewhat over powering when it comes in and I think the balance of the vocal parts as a whole could refined also. For me, I found this song quite challenging as far as getting the levels right.
Also listen for the snare builds throughout the song. Sounds like your snare gate is interfering and chopping them off below the threshold.
Nice work so far.
Dave
Listening with headphones, tonally I like what I hear. There is just a balance issue that I think you could work on a little more. The second guitar part sounds somewhat over powering when it comes in and I think the balance of the vocal parts as a whole could refined also. For me, I found this song quite challenging as far as getting the levels right.
Also listen for the snare builds throughout the song. Sounds like your snare gate is interfering and chopping them off below the threshold.
Nice work so far.
Dave