09-12-2016, 04:36 AM
Love your bass-line. Very funky and works well with the kick so that the bottom end is nicely balanced. Your snare is also nice and clear which means that overall your mix grooves along nicely.
The thing that worries me is that it sounds like your vocals, guitars and rhythm sections each have their own, very different ambiences. The rhythm section is present and funky in Studio A but your guitars sound like they're standing 10 ft behind the drums and the vocals sound like another 10 ft behind the guitars in a vast hall - so the overall effect is more of a blend of disparate overdubs rather than an ensemble playing together.
hope this helps.
Cheers, Simon
The thing that worries me is that it sounds like your vocals, guitars and rhythm sections each have their own, very different ambiences. The rhythm section is present and funky in Studio A but your guitars sound like they're standing 10 ft behind the drums and the vocals sound like another 10 ft behind the guitars in a vast hall - so the overall effect is more of a blend of disparate overdubs rather than an ensemble playing together.
hope this helps.
Cheers, Simon
Be fierce in your encouragement, kind in your criticism and try and remember that the art of a good critique is not to make someone else's mix sound like yours...but to help the mixer realize their own vision.
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