08-11-2016, 03:24 PM
It sounds pretty good. Here's some of the issues that pop out to me. All somewhat minor.
1. Overall it's a little, slightly "boxy". Especially on the rhythm guitar. I hate talking numbers but I'd consider a bit of a cut at about 300hz to make the guitar a little more exciting.
2. This is a personal thing, but I find the panning of the guitars in the verses distracting from the vocals. I don't what tracks you had to work with but it'd work better with the 'chug' guitars balanced L/R and the picked guitar in the center. Right now the guitars grab my attention and not the vocals. In the choruses and later in the song there are more guitars but the vocal becomes more of the focus. The parts and imaging support the vocals more as opposed to drawn attention away from them.
It sounds good. It could use a hair more high end for excitement but that could be more of a mastering thing.
Good work.
1. Overall it's a little, slightly "boxy". Especially on the rhythm guitar. I hate talking numbers but I'd consider a bit of a cut at about 300hz to make the guitar a little more exciting.
2. This is a personal thing, but I find the panning of the guitars in the verses distracting from the vocals. I don't what tracks you had to work with but it'd work better with the 'chug' guitars balanced L/R and the picked guitar in the center. Right now the guitars grab my attention and not the vocals. In the choruses and later in the song there are more guitars but the vocal becomes more of the focus. The parts and imaging support the vocals more as opposed to drawn attention away from them.
It sounds good. It could use a hair more high end for excitement but that could be more of a mastering thing.
Good work.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.