17-07-2016, 07:39 PM
I can see why you wanted to come back it. Cool song.
I think you have a very dense mix, especially during the verses. There seems to be some cool stuff in there, but I'm fighting to hear each element, instead of having each presented as a point of interest.
When I do this to a mix, I call it the 'Deep Purple Syndrome' ("Can I have everything louder than everything else.") Unfortunately I do that a lot.
Maybe panning elements into their own space across the stereo image and not letting other elements encroach would clean it up.
I like where you are headed with this. Nice work.
I think you have a very dense mix, especially during the verses. There seems to be some cool stuff in there, but I'm fighting to hear each element, instead of having each presented as a point of interest.
When I do this to a mix, I call it the 'Deep Purple Syndrome' ("Can I have everything louder than everything else.") Unfortunately I do that a lot.
Maybe panning elements into their own space across the stereo image and not letting other elements encroach would clean it up.
I like where you are headed with this. Nice work.