13-06-2016, 08:26 PM
I think Don is spot on with his assessment. Your second mix has more low end in it, but now I think the bass needs something on it. It feels a little "floppy." A multband compressor did wonders for mine, in my opinion.
Your background vox parts sound cool, but they feel completely disconnected from the song.
I think maybe you could get a little low mids into your snare as well.
Maybe some long term automation should be used as well. All of the sections seems to have a similar energy. I did a lot of rides on the guitar parts to try and create some movement between sections.
You're pretty damn close, just some things that I heard in your mix. I like how you got her voice sounding!
Draper
Your background vox parts sound cool, but they feel completely disconnected from the song.
I think maybe you could get a little low mids into your snare as well.
Maybe some long term automation should be used as well. All of the sections seems to have a similar energy. I did a lot of rides on the guitar parts to try and create some movement between sections.
You're pretty damn close, just some things that I heard in your mix. I like how you got her voice sounding!
Draper