Hi ,
I think you have under estimated your talent I think you have done a Pretty for good job for a first attempt and does sound promising we have to start somewhere !
Just needs some eq and level adjustments.
sounds a touch bottom end heavy ,Try rolling off the low frequencies of the kick and bass below 50hz (just for now ) and remove some boxyness from the kick drum with graphic of parametric eq around the 150hz area to give the also bass some space and a touch more punch .Maybe remove any effects especially on the master buss as would like to hear your mix dry to try to help with eq and balance.
The synth that comes in at 0.35 could come down a touch maybe a little eq reduction by 2-3 db around the1,5 to 6k area and eq the low end of the reverb below 1k (Just for Now) .
The tambourine could come down a touch.
Also maybe rolling off the low frequencies of the guitar solo reverb also below 1k .
Hope this feedback helps a little .
Cheers
I think you have under estimated your talent I think you have done a Pretty for good job for a first attempt and does sound promising we have to start somewhere !
Just needs some eq and level adjustments.
sounds a touch bottom end heavy ,Try rolling off the low frequencies of the kick and bass below 50hz (just for now ) and remove some boxyness from the kick drum with graphic of parametric eq around the 150hz area to give the also bass some space and a touch more punch .Maybe remove any effects especially on the master buss as would like to hear your mix dry to try to help with eq and balance.
The synth that comes in at 0.35 could come down a touch maybe a little eq reduction by 2-3 db around the1,5 to 6k area and eq the low end of the reverb below 1k (Just for Now) .
The tambourine could come down a touch.
Also maybe rolling off the low frequencies of the guitar solo reverb also below 1k .
Hope this feedback helps a little .
Cheers
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