the dice

[FytaKyte]

Thank you for your concepts is my first mix of this kind of music, this genre is generally not to my liking. So surely I will have many failures in the mix, which already have cleared me on several points.
The snare was well phased, I'm not so stupid as to not realize that you have to offset the microphone down with respect to the above, except that the error was that by making the mix gained a lot the mic volume below the snare.
Regarding the voice I think the sway of the volume is a problem of decision under review. Do not use any deeser, only compression and very little, it may be a problem of eq, maybe.
Regarding the guitars there I have my Achilles heel achievement no longer to find the right point of requiring gender eq so chooses not to play them a lot and try to preserve the original sound and recorded.
I'm going back to look at the mix and try to find the sound that the style requires, if they have any suggestions are welcome.

Sorry for my english, hope you understand me.

No problem - I understand the gist of your reply.
...and I'm sorry - I did not mean to suggest you didn't know about the importance of things being in phase. Rather, it was simply the first thing that came to mind when going through my personal "checklist" of possible problem-solvers.

Regarding suggestions for a reference mix: As I said, try anything off the "Sound Awake" album by Karnivool. https://m.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6E86AD3BA50F2620 It's progressive heavy-ish rock with very melodic vocals.