The Brew: 'What I Want'

[Merkytcio]

Some interesting tones here but the song seems disjointed. Try not to forget it is a composition where the parts should work together musically and not just a series of disjointed tones and spaces. Give it another try. You've got some good ideas but I think you can do better.

Thank you very much for comment!!!! but I do not fully understand what you mean saying "disjointed"? Could you explain in detail? I used one reverb on all tracks. However, the guitar has been recorded with reverb. maybe it was the cause of disjointed spaces?
Here my second mix version. Maybe it will be better.....