Hey man I just finished this mix it was challenging ! 
I dig the description you made, interesting point. I had less problem with the guitar than the keys personally ! But the vocals where tooough !
Here's my two cents :
Why didn't you keep the guitar in the left like the intro ?
When I listen to your mix and a/b with mine, I find mine generally brighter. (not saying one is better) It's a personal taste, but I would suggest to put up more high ends on the vocals, high hats etc ... Maybe cut some low mid a bit, seems to have a lot energy in this area.
Nice work cheers
I dig the description you made, interesting point. I had less problem with the guitar than the keys personally ! But the vocals where tooough !
Here's my two cents :
Why didn't you keep the guitar in the left like the intro ?
When I listen to your mix and a/b with mine, I find mine generally brighter. (not saying one is better) It's a personal taste, but I would suggest to put up more high ends on the vocals, high hats etc ... Maybe cut some low mid a bit, seems to have a lot energy in this area.
Nice work cheers