20-09-2015, 06:41 PM
Hello Student89,
Congrats for your mix !
I'm a novice in audio production so don't take my feedback too serious, but hopefully it helps
AND I'm a bit biased because I've already worked on the song so I know the original material.
I like how the different sounds fit together during verses. Only thing I don't like is the panning (especially in the 2nd verse)
I very much like the energy and width of choruses. I do feel a bit of lack of clarity though. Maybe it comes from too much reverb?
I also don't hear synth3 very well - I'd suggest either making more space for it or removing it completely.
And congrats for the intro into the 3rd chorus - I like the way you removed the backing vocals and added some noise transition.
Hope it helps !
Cheers,
Moussa
Congrats for your mix !
I'm a novice in audio production so don't take my feedback too serious, but hopefully it helps
AND I'm a bit biased because I've already worked on the song so I know the original material.
I like how the different sounds fit together during verses. Only thing I don't like is the panning (especially in the 2nd verse)
I very much like the energy and width of choruses. I do feel a bit of lack of clarity though. Maybe it comes from too much reverb?
I also don't hear synth3 very well - I'd suggest either making more space for it or removing it completely.
And congrats for the intro into the 3rd chorus - I like the way you removed the backing vocals and added some noise transition.
Hope it helps !
Cheers,
Moussa