23-08-2015, 03:58 AM
Its nice to hear the instruments! It feels very calm and serene
The original has so many melody lines clashing with vox (piano, harp, glock, flute, lead guitar), all trying to create "emotion and epicness". Not helped by the overly sibilant "fixSSS what needSS fixSSSing" vocal line.
(22-08-2015, 10:31 PM)The_Metallurgist Wrote: i found the long run of emotion in the second half of the song somewhat exaggerated, even exhausting from being kept on the wave of emotion for nearly half the song's duration.+1 to that
cheers
The original has so many melody lines clashing with vox (piano, harp, glock, flute, lead guitar), all trying to create "emotion and epicness". Not helped by the overly sibilant "fixSSS what needSS fixSSSing" vocal line.
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