30-07-2015, 09:47 PM
I like your ideas with the loops. It's a very different approach from mine so keep in mind how taste factors in, but I wonder if maybe they're just a little too distractingly forward/present in the mix, jumping in front of the vocal often. Might do to tame the transients a bit if you agree.
Especially in the choruses, the guitars are masking some really interesting vocal textures. It's tempting to go whole hog with the EQ, but you might consider finessing the dynamics (both on the guitars and vocals) first before you start trimming.
The delays on the vocal are really cool, but since you're using them as an effect more than a spatial tool, maybe consider changing them up here and there.
Overall I enjoyed listening, keep it up. Lots of cool ideas, but a little more focus on balance is primarily what I'd like to hear.
Especially in the choruses, the guitars are masking some really interesting vocal textures. It's tempting to go whole hog with the EQ, but you might consider finessing the dynamics (both on the guitars and vocals) first before you start trimming.
The delays on the vocal are really cool, but since you're using them as an effect more than a spatial tool, maybe consider changing them up here and there.
Overall I enjoyed listening, keep it up. Lots of cool ideas, but a little more focus on balance is primarily what I'd like to hear.