Here's my version

[PeterEkberg]

Thank You Audiomuze for your detailed review and for listening. I think my biggest problem when mixing is when I'm working with one track, that after a while it's hard to hear something else. I think a good idea for me would be to take a brake between each track. And yes you explained well, I understand what you mean :-)
Thanks again, I hope one day I will be able to give more in depth reviews myself. At now I can just say if I like it or not but I appreciate all who takes time to write something :-)

thx
Peter