Did you use the original mix as a reference track? 
Because if you did you would hear for yourself that you are doing too much, trying too hard. It's a simple metal song with a bon-jovi-turns-into-black-metal-Part in the middle. There is no need to compress the shit out of everything, especially the snare Every time the snare hits it feels like a crack with the whip The drums are WAY too powerful and dominating this mix from start to end. Even when EVERYTHING is supposed to calm DOWN and the singer goes full Bon Jovi your snare is still hitting like a truck.
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Because if you did you would hear for yourself that you are doing too much, trying too hard. It's a simple metal song with a bon-jovi-turns-into-black-metal-Part in the middle. There is no need to compress the shit out of everything, especially the snare Every time the snare hits it feels like a crack with the whip The drums are WAY too powerful and dominating this mix from start to end. Even when EVERYTHING is supposed to calm DOWN and the singer goes full Bon Jovi your snare is still hitting like a truck. check out this article: http://therecordingrevolution.com/2015/0...-you-more/