14-05-2015, 01:51 AM
I really like your mix. I think that you've managed to build a pretty coherent vision throughout the whole song and all the elements sit well together.
1. i think you need some surgical EQ on mandolin ....the percussive pick noise is at odds with the smooth style of your mix...and doesn't really work as a contrast element either...very noticeable during intro.....but also breaks through at other times.
2. maybe a smidge more bass guitar in section 1 would be nice....or maybe a bit more compression to lock it in tight because it sounds good but the occasional note seems too low
3. using DT vox all the way through verses is a nice choral effect...but you also hear all the un-synchronised phrasing which doesn't sound good. Maybe some automating muting would be good so having single and DT phrasing
you can obviously put a mix together. If you really want to get the most out of this forum....and want more feedback....then you need to start giving feedback too. It can be daunting at first but it doesn't get any easier unless you start.
cheers
1. i think you need some surgical EQ on mandolin ....the percussive pick noise is at odds with the smooth style of your mix...and doesn't really work as a contrast element either...very noticeable during intro.....but also breaks through at other times.
2. maybe a smidge more bass guitar in section 1 would be nice....or maybe a bit more compression to lock it in tight because it sounds good but the occasional note seems too low
3. using DT vox all the way through verses is a nice choral effect...but you also hear all the un-synchronised phrasing which doesn't sound good. Maybe some automating muting would be good so having single and DT phrasing
you can obviously put a mix together. If you really want to get the most out of this forum....and want more feedback....then you need to start giving feedback too. It can be daunting at first but it doesn't get any easier unless you start.
cheers