Newbie mixer looking for feedback!

[BePowerful Musik]

NOT BAD PFN I REALLY LIKE THE KICK DRUM LEVELS . BUT ONE THING I THINK YOU SHOULD DO IS BRING UP THE MAIN INSTRUMENTS OR VOCALS IN THE SONGS AND LET THE OTHERS STAY AT LOWER LEVELS IN YOUR MIX AND I THINK YOU COULD HAVE ALOT BETTER MIXES. PLEASE LISTEN TO MY VERSION AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. THANKS