24-03-2015, 06:18 AM
Sounds like you had some fun indeed! I like that! 
Some really cool ideas, like the treatment of the loop, nice modulation there!
The little delay throws on the vocals are a nice touch as well. Good sound for the Rhodes, bass is OK although a bit low (in level): it has a tendency to be masked by the horns and drums (probably the reverb/ambience is eating a good deal of the low-end).
A few things that I'm less convinced with are:
- the horns are very far away in the mix, like they are way behind the rest of the group which is "in your face" close in comparison
- the drums are also quite drenched in room/reverb, they lack a bit of presence and punch IMHO
- the vocal sound is a bit muffled, perhaps the reverb on it has a bit too much low-mids?
Still a cool effort with some nice ideas! Keep it up!
Some really cool ideas, like the treatment of the loop, nice modulation there!
The little delay throws on the vocals are a nice touch as well. Good sound for the Rhodes, bass is OK although a bit low (in level): it has a tendency to be masked by the horns and drums (probably the reverb/ambience is eating a good deal of the low-end).
A few things that I'm less convinced with are:
- the horns are very far away in the mix, like they are way behind the rest of the group which is "in your face" close in comparison
- the drums are also quite drenched in room/reverb, they lack a bit of presence and punch IMHO
- the vocal sound is a bit muffled, perhaps the reverb on it has a bit too much low-mids?
Still a cool effort with some nice ideas! Keep it up!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here