27-01-2015, 09:33 PM
Sounds pretty good overall. A few things that didn't quite work for me, though:
- The effect on the Rhodes sounds a little bit cheesy maybe, especially in the intro?
- The lead vox in the chorus sound too small - like he's in a cupboard... It's a tricky vocal to mix, since it was recorded so badly, and it makes sense therefore to give more prominence to the backing vox, but at the moment you've got a drop in impact and energy as you move from verse to chorus
- The Rhodes FX track is a bit too dominant in the chorus, I think
- Given that the backing vocals sound good, it's a shame that you haven't panned them to help make the chorus sound bigger
- Some of the synths sound a bit dry to me
- The lead vocal in the middle 8 is quite a bit too low in the mix
Hope that helps!
- The effect on the Rhodes sounds a little bit cheesy maybe, especially in the intro?
- The lead vox in the chorus sound too small - like he's in a cupboard... It's a tricky vocal to mix, since it was recorded so badly, and it makes sense therefore to give more prominence to the backing vox, but at the moment you've got a drop in impact and energy as you move from verse to chorus
- The Rhodes FX track is a bit too dominant in the chorus, I think
- Given that the backing vocals sound good, it's a shame that you haven't panned them to help make the chorus sound bigger
- Some of the synths sound a bit dry to me
- The lead vocal in the middle 8 is quite a bit too low in the mix
Hope that helps!