16-01-2015, 04:08 PM
Building on that live aspect is quite a nice idea, though i think it's not very convincing how you did it. I would expect this screaming through the whole song rather at a concert that is addressed to teenie girls such as Tokyo Hotel or Backstreet Boys (I don't know any current boy groups...). Some kind of clapping would probably do it better.
With all that background noise it's hard to judge the mixing of the song itself. It seems to be alright. But like everyone else I would advise you to work out the backing vocals on the "postchorus" - whatever you might call this part. The middle pitch sings the main melody and the backing vocals are just as important as the lead vocals in this part (slow down, baby!).
With all that background noise it's hard to judge the mixing of the song itself. It seems to be alright. But like everyone else I would advise you to work out the backing vocals on the "postchorus" - whatever you might call this part. The middle pitch sings the main melody and the backing vocals are just as important as the lead vocals in this part (slow down, baby!).