14-12-2014, 05:33 PM
Hi Dom,
I think this is a good take on the song, just a few things that could improve in my opinion:
The drums lack a bit of impact, depth and balance. Some use of (side-)compression, verbs and distortion might help.
The chorus needs a bit more of depth as well (delays/verbs etc).
Nice version of the breakdown, the piano might be a tad too loud/in the front.
The lead vocals verb sits nice in there but is too prominent in the first verse, ride your fader.
The solo guitar (well, a problem by itself, for me at least it was
) changes to a rhythmic pattern when the chorus enters an disappears at the repetition. That leaves a hole in the arrangement, which needs a fix...
All this is of course just a matter of taste, and only meant to be of help!
Regards, M`Ray
I think this is a good take on the song, just a few things that could improve in my opinion:
The drums lack a bit of impact, depth and balance. Some use of (side-)compression, verbs and distortion might help.
The chorus needs a bit more of depth as well (delays/verbs etc).
Nice version of the breakdown, the piano might be a tad too loud/in the front.
The lead vocals verb sits nice in there but is too prominent in the first verse, ride your fader.
The solo guitar (well, a problem by itself, for me at least it was
) changes to a rhythmic pattern when the chorus enters an disappears at the repetition. That leaves a hole in the arrangement, which needs a fix...All this is of course just a matter of taste, and only meant to be of help!
Regards, M`Ray