27-02-2013, 10:26 PM
My biggest critique would be that the use of ambience on the voice makes it sound far from the listener. One of the stylistic parts of what I do when I sing is to sound like I am right next you, whispering in your ear. It's kind of my trick, but it seems to work wonders and convey a certain sexiness. I'd be interested to hear the contrast of an upfront vocal and you ambient drums. Might start to sound like "Love Sick" from Bopb Dylan.