hi mark i still like my virsion more 
i think there are 3 main fixes needed here ,the bass is overpowering at times and is not constant ,and the vocal is lost at times you need to automate so it will be ontop.you need to deass the vocal. i loved to delay that come and go(not the constant) at the flut i needed to think that
and you can join me in with the thanks for mike for making this happen "thanks mike"
i think there are 3 main fixes needed here ,the bass is overpowering at times and is not constant ,and the vocal is lost at times you need to automate so it will be ontop.you need to deass the vocal. i loved to delay that come and go(not the constant) at the flut i needed to think that
and you can join me in with the thanks for mike for making this happen "thanks mike"