30-10-2014, 05:38 PM
Nice mix takka360! 
I like the dynamics of the drums, and the general smoothness you achieved.
I think the vocals need more more ambience and more "air" as well, I know there's a lack of it from the source, because it's been tracked with a SM57, but I think it's achievable with EQ.
Also there's some places where it's been comped and the tone is not exactly the same from one phrase to the next, so it's a bit tricky and might need some multing to EQ these parts so that they match better.
But overall, I like your version!
I like the dynamics of the drums, and the general smoothness you achieved.
I think the vocals need more more ambience and more "air" as well, I know there's a lack of it from the source, because it's been tracked with a SM57, but I think it's achievable with EQ.
Also there's some places where it's been comped and the tone is not exactly the same from one phrase to the next, so it's a bit tricky and might need some multing to EQ these parts so that they match better.
But overall, I like your version!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here