I like your version. The choruses have a guitar part I missed in mine, did you play that 
Some 7th chord first very confusing havin the ones i knew in my ears, but pretty cool and a good find if you digged it out of the multi.
My one, and for me very usual complaint, is the lack of extra punch in the chorus, the guitar part is loud, I´ll give you that, but the drums and bas doesnt hit harder, in fact it seems to me the verses have more impact on my system, the chorus are just squashed.
I attach a screenshot of your file and mine, yours is the upper one.
Good balance and tone to my ears - just a bit of masterin issues.
Some 7th chord first very confusing havin the ones i knew in my ears, but pretty cool and a good find if you digged it out of the multi.
My one, and for me very usual complaint, is the lack of extra punch in the chorus, the guitar part is loud, I´ll give you that, but the drums and bas doesnt hit harder, in fact it seems to me the verses have more impact on my system, the chorus are just squashed.
I attach a screenshot of your file and mine, yours is the upper one.
Good balance and tone to my ears - just a bit of masterin issues.
Old ears, old gear, little boy inside love music and sounds and my wife, not necessarily in that order