18-09-2014, 12:22 PM
I sort of agree with Vosk0z on a couple of his points.
The sense of distance is probably due to the vox fx. I agree with the concept that this track is a great vehicle for some vox fx, but maybe a bit more contrast between verse and chorus would work better.
My ears are also telling me that there is a lack of brightness. The frequency spectrum looks a bit low in the 1-5kHz region, especially during verses. You could probably do something in the master buss to boost the upper mids and presence frequencies fairly easily, or re balance the mix which is way more tedious but maybe help you understand where these frequencies have gone in the first place.
cheers
The sense of distance is probably due to the vox fx. I agree with the concept that this track is a great vehicle for some vox fx, but maybe a bit more contrast between verse and chorus would work better.
My ears are also telling me that there is a lack of brightness. The frequency spectrum looks a bit low in the 1-5kHz region, especially during verses. You could probably do something in the master buss to boost the upper mids and presence frequencies fairly easily, or re balance the mix which is way more tedious but maybe help you understand where these frequencies have gone in the first place.
cheers