My gosh, nice intro.. I mean.. NICE INTRO..sorry, did i stress it enuf? 
Now..
- Nice drum samples. Though i thought it was a "indie rock" song, you turnt it into a kinda heavy rock (?) song? Well, i can't really say anything about that
I think i like this version too.
- Watch out for these low mid freqs. They are booming your drum set i think.
- Nice guitar sound for my taste. Suits the whole vibe of the song.
Just a lil imbalance between them and the vocals @ chorus
- Transition phase: Nice guitars, again! Vocals are ok. Till the "sit and wait " part in the lyrics. I would like the dynamics to be treated better at that point.
I mean, in the Tr.Phase everything stops and calms down and you got your vocals and the rest of the sound surrounding it. I would like it to escalate till you hit 4.20.
- And man, oh man, you made him actually sing. He was a bit off tune @ many points
Anyway, thats what i hear on my setup here.
Hope it helps.
Cheers!
PS. I must have listened to that intro about 6 times till this PS
Now..
- Nice drum samples. Though i thought it was a "indie rock" song, you turnt it into a kinda heavy rock (?) song? Well, i can't really say anything about that
I think i like this version too.
- Watch out for these low mid freqs. They are booming your drum set i think.
- Nice guitar sound for my taste. Suits the whole vibe of the song.
Just a lil imbalance between them and the vocals @ chorus
- Transition phase: Nice guitars, again! Vocals are ok. Till the "sit and wait " part in the lyrics. I would like the dynamics to be treated better at that point.
I mean, in the Tr.Phase everything stops and calms down and you got your vocals and the rest of the sound surrounding it. I would like it to escalate till you hit 4.20.
- And man, oh man, you made him actually sing. He was a bit off tune @ many points
Anyway, thats what i hear on my setup here.
Hope it helps.
Cheers!
PS. I must have listened to that intro about 6 times till this PS