I'm Alright, Second Attempt

[azwayne]

Need a little less on the overdriven guitar (left channel). It's just dominating everything. What misaghkarimi refers to is that the bass and kick often hit at the same time (or the bass is still sustaining so the kick can't be heard.) I tackle this by almost routinely putting a ducking compressor on the bass guitar, keyed by the kick drum. When the kick hits, I'll drop the bass by 1-2 dB. Just enough that it backs out of the way but not enough so you really notice a change. My personal preference is usually for more of a vocals forward mix. If I were working on this revision, I'd want to raise them up a hair.

It's a very good start, though. Stick with it!