03-08-2014, 01:13 PM
This begins to be very good mix of this material.
Vocal sound is great.
Piano is great.
Bass is much better now.
Harmonica slightly disturbs vocals articulation frequencies. If it were a solo it would be just fine, but when it just background texture, it could be slightly softer.
After that harmonica the strings sound little dull, or too controlled. Maybe softening the harmonica would make that effect disappear.
End war is great, but the clock is slightly too bright or loud to me.
Vocal sound is great.
Piano is great.
Bass is much better now.
Harmonica slightly disturbs vocals articulation frequencies. If it were a solo it would be just fine, but when it just background texture, it could be slightly softer.
After that harmonica the strings sound little dull, or too controlled. Maybe softening the harmonica would make that effect disappear.
End war is great, but the clock is slightly too bright or loud to me.