21-07-2014, 12:03 PM
Now it sounds great to me. Warm full sound, maybe not too modern, but on the other hand the song is neither too modern. Instruments find nicely their places in the total image.
Maybe something could be done on the area where the low-register of the singer meets the bass.
Idea and implementation of intro is great. It could work perfectly in live-situation where singer is talking to audience while playing that intro. (But maybe not for the radio version of pop-song.) I would leave the strings away from intro, for without it the intro has nice improvisational feeling. With strings one starts to listen it more as a composition.
Great vocal sound
Moving background vocals at 02:06 felt odd to me with this otherwise traditional sound. It feels like a choir of ghost.