25-06-2014, 03:30 AM
Nice work so far man 
Here are the biggest things that jump out to me:
1. the overall power of the recording is a bit, ahem, flaccid... and one of the bigger culprits being the drums. What I found helped is by putting a compressor on the entire drum mix and timing the settings so that it pumps (in time) ever so slightly. I think this might benefit your drums to give them a bit more power behind them.
2. your chorus/bridge lead vox has a bit too much low end on the plosives; you know what to do
3. you might want to try making your attack time even a little bit longer on your lead vox compression - you can hear the compressor working a bit too much in some sections.
*or*
you can take the opposite approach and do a faster attack and slower release and get a little bit more high end without having to eq
great job so far; hopefully my comments were helpful
Here are the biggest things that jump out to me:
1. the overall power of the recording is a bit, ahem, flaccid... and one of the bigger culprits being the drums. What I found helped is by putting a compressor on the entire drum mix and timing the settings so that it pumps (in time) ever so slightly. I think this might benefit your drums to give them a bit more power behind them.
2. your chorus/bridge lead vox has a bit too much low end on the plosives; you know what to do
3. you might want to try making your attack time even a little bit longer on your lead vox compression - you can hear the compressor working a bit too much in some sections.
*or*
you can take the opposite approach and do a faster attack and slower release and get a little bit more high end without having to eq
great job so far; hopefully my comments were helpful