12-06-2014, 05:49 AM
Well, you accidentally uploaded two coppies of your mix but other than that, it seems pretty good. 
Percussion is a little loud I think. I'd also suggest taking time to listen to the instrumental parts separately and look for the neat little hooks and runs that you need to bring out more. There's some interesting stuff in this number. I can't tell if that's a delay or just a lot of short reverb on the vocal but it's interesting...
There are a few EQ and balance problems but this is a good first run. Now that you have a complete mix, give some of the others here a listen and see if anything catches your ear. It's a great way to learn and remember, there's more than one way to make a mix so don't be surprised if everyone approaches this a little differently.
Percussion is a little loud I think. I'd also suggest taking time to listen to the instrumental parts separately and look for the neat little hooks and runs that you need to bring out more. There's some interesting stuff in this number. I can't tell if that's a delay or just a lot of short reverb on the vocal but it's interesting...
There are a few EQ and balance problems but this is a good first run. Now that you have a complete mix, give some of the others here a listen and see if anything catches your ear. It's a great way to learn and remember, there's more than one way to make a mix so don't be surprised if everyone approaches this a little differently.
Old West Audio