01-06-2014, 02:50 AM
Listened to version 2.....LOVED the ElecGtr tone and effects, especially the intro......excellent work there. The vocals also sit well in the mix too ---except the very last word "deny", where it loses clarity.
You've used the acoustic guitar to good effect during the choruses - which is tempting - but you haven't fixed the resonance.
You've lifted the snare drum out of tbe loop nicely .... but i think your bass and kick are conflicting so the bottom end sometimes sounds a bit wooly.
Lots to like about the mix..
..couple of things to look at if you do version3
You've used the acoustic guitar to good effect during the choruses - which is tempting - but you haven't fixed the resonance.
You've lifted the snare drum out of tbe loop nicely .... but i think your bass and kick are conflicting so the bottom end sometimes sounds a bit wooly.
Lots to like about the mix..
..couple of things to look at if you do version3