21-01-2013, 11:43 AM
Hi,
interesting take on this one. There are some surprising moments in it. I just write down what I hear:
A very dominant bass, guitars are in the background (interesting decision!) and a bit harsh sounding. The snare sounds very much like paper, misses body/sustain. Vocals sound great (nice delay idea). Toms have a bit too much low frequencies. The outro offers a very clicky (is that a word?) drum and the modulation on the bass seems a bit too obvious to me.
Let me divide this into two groups:
a) Things that seem to be the core of your mix: dominant bass, backgroundish guitars, vocals
b) Things that seem to be improvable without altering your mix to much: guitar harshness, snare, toms, cklicky drums and modulated bass during outro
Having said this I am by no means an authority when it comes to mixing and I worked on this song myself, so maybe I am a bit biased.
interesting take on this one. There are some surprising moments in it. I just write down what I hear:
A very dominant bass, guitars are in the background (interesting decision!) and a bit harsh sounding. The snare sounds very much like paper, misses body/sustain. Vocals sound great (nice delay idea). Toms have a bit too much low frequencies. The outro offers a very clicky (is that a word?) drum and the modulation on the bass seems a bit too obvious to me.
Let me divide this into two groups:
a) Things that seem to be the core of your mix: dominant bass, backgroundish guitars, vocals
b) Things that seem to be improvable without altering your mix to much: guitar harshness, snare, toms, cklicky drums and modulated bass during outro
Having said this I am by no means an authority when it comes to mixing and I worked on this song myself, so maybe I am a bit biased.