11-01-2013, 03:10 AM
Very cool vision. It is like the honky-tonk in hell version.
I only have a few comments.
1. I would try to identify the interesting bits and really emphasis them when they pop up, particularly when the vocals aren't in. The drum hit on the downbeat at 0:27 is a good example. I would like to hear that hotter, then have the drums back off as the vocals come in. There are all sorts of moments like that which can be highlighted when the vocals aren't in.
2. The electric guitar overdub is not present during verse 2 and is mixed pretty low during the solo. That part is almost like the vocal in terms of prominence. During verse 2 it can be ducked a bit to highlight other instruments, particularly when it is sustaining notes. But the part should be much higher for the guitar solo
3. The vocals are getting buried during the third verse. I am starting to lose the presence and clarity.
Overall, very cool. I dig it rough like this.
Thanks,
Wesley
I only have a few comments.
1. I would try to identify the interesting bits and really emphasis them when they pop up, particularly when the vocals aren't in. The drum hit on the downbeat at 0:27 is a good example. I would like to hear that hotter, then have the drums back off as the vocals come in. There are all sorts of moments like that which can be highlighted when the vocals aren't in.
2. The electric guitar overdub is not present during verse 2 and is mixed pretty low during the solo. That part is almost like the vocal in terms of prominence. During verse 2 it can be ducked a bit to highlight other instruments, particularly when it is sustaining notes. But the part should be much higher for the guitar solo
3. The vocals are getting buried during the third verse. I am starting to lose the presence and clarity.
Overall, very cool. I dig it rough like this.
Thanks,
Wesley
(10-01-2013, 04:10 PM)jakobole Wrote: I tried to tame the drums a bit, made the solo-gt appear a bit wetter, ditto with pedalsteel and some other bits you only hear the day after
(It's a petty the piano is compressed this much - I tried expansion without much luck. And a china-cymbal here and there would've been great....)
